I have never let my schooling interfere with my education ~ Mark Twain

Monday, December 5, 2011

O Mama Mia....

I haven't been on here in eons! School does terrible things to my blogging habits I tell ya. In honor of me being nearly finished with my poetry class, here is an imitation poem* I did.

*Imitation poems follow the skeletal structure of their original with the poet placing his/her own specifics and verbs. Think poetry mad lib.



Deep in a Mirror
(after a poem by Robin Becker entitled “When Someone Dies Young”)

When a dancer looks in the mirror
a trickle of rejection lives
in her spine like a growth.
The crook of a knee
is a leg you would sculpt.
When a dancer looks in the mirror
and she arches fiercely
at the chained barre
in a studio tossed by music
and a director's scowl,
she longs for the clock,
preferring the warm-ups past.
Corrections she hears over and over
to suck in her stomach
dulling to hammers, bones
aligned with each twitch
to their anatomical ache.
When a dancer looks in the mirror
she wants to burn fat furiously
and get forgiveness for holidays of fat-scalloped morsels.
When a dancer looks in the mirror
the mystery of her muscles own
memory finds a rhythm
in the sunshine beam at the window.
The rigorous technique
of that spewing
mirror takes a hardening, like a nutshell,
and balks at no
when a dancer looks in the mirror.

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